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PostSubject: The Creeping Darkness   The Creeping Darkness Icon_minitimeFri Jan 25, 2008 2:17 am

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I walked up the steps as quietly as possible, another night out drinking and I don't want Jamie finding out. I heard one of the steps creak, and I noticed I wasn't on the steps...shit...she's awake...I am busted...what the fuck do I do now? I heard another creaking step and looked back to where I thought I heard it..."Hello?" I saw a figure standing completely motionless, too blurry and too dark from the lack of light and the lack of sober. "Jamie?" I tried to keep calm but I noticed I was frozen in place. "Jamie honey, I am sorry I was out so late." A moan crept from the darkness. "I will make it up to you though." Another moan followed by the figure walking toward me arms open and out, I guess she wants a hug... I walked over calm "I love you Jamie." I walked a few steps forward, when I noticed in irregularity in her steps...almost lifeless creeping. "Are you okay?" she fell into my arms. "Honey?" A ripping at my neck made me scream, as she tightened her grip I felt warm liquid stream down from my neck, dear god....color fell from my eyes, and I lost all feeling.
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PostSubject: Re: The Creeping Darkness   The Creeping Darkness Icon_minitimeSun Jan 27, 2008 5:02 pm

it's like the end... at the start... LOL. it'll be interesting to see where you can take it
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PostSubject: Re: The Creeping Darkness   The Creeping Darkness Icon_minitimeMon Jan 28, 2008 5:00 pm

I love starting a story with an ending feel, i'll have Chapter 1 soon
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